My First Animation Reel

[Clybaun]

Hello all!

My name is Pere Via,I'm a enthusiastic spanish(sorry for my poor english) animator. I just finished my first demoreel, i know that it's not to much but hopefully the next want will be better.

It's all animated by me, and also modeled the Griffin and the Little chicken

Here the links:

Vimeo


Youtube

and also my profile in LinkedIN:

Feel free to comment and critic, this will help me to do better the next demo.

Hope you like it!

[veer]

Hey, Nice reel... I think u need to work on Body dynamics and acting.

Well, in the first shot wen the guy gets up try to lead with the hip and now its kinda floating in the air and u need to work on spacing and ease in and ease out, because of this the character is looking like weight less. and the poses could be stronger. Finally in the acting shots the blinks are not working and eyes are floating all around, the eyelids should cushion not overshoot ...

Overall nice work.

Veer
happy animating

"The biggest men and women with the biggest ideas can be shot
down by the smallest men and women with the smallest minds.
Think big anyway."

[Clybaun]

Thanks a lot! I take note of all your advices! For the next one I will put atension on those things.

[jhoythottle]

I liked the reel. I especially liked the griffin model.

My only critique isn't really a critique. On the animation of the Dumb and Dumber Dialogue I really think instead of finishing with "oh its here on the suitcase" is to actually finish the animation and show the actual punchline which is "Samsonite! I was way off." i love that line and was waiting to see how you animated it, but it didn't exist. I would love to see that finished.

Nice job though.